This is heavy, heavy stuff, and only people who've experienced even the slightest amount of pain in their lives can connect with it, feel the emotions swirling in the poem rush into you, make you feel small and insignificant in the light of the injustices in the world. It's written to the point (something I can't achieve, but appreciate) and that brings out the stark clarity of what's going on. And it makes you hurt as much as it's hurting, and when a poem can bring in so much of emotion, there is only one thing to say about it:
It's brilliant.

R. K. Iris.

This is...this is hard...it's written so well but the emotions...they just jump up and bulldoze right through you. I'm awed.

R. K. Iris.

It's funny and amazing how a few words can convey so much...this is lovely, and I'll be waiting avidly for the rest... :)

R. K. Iris.