Cool story bro. And actually, she didn't over react. If you ask me, it was more like under reacting...

Great story! Keep it up

ADEHSSJSKSKSZKH WTF. This love triangle is fucking with my emotions. Didn't Jess almost rape her and called her beautiful? And now we have Brandon over here with her swapping spit?! Omfg. I can't

Thank God Brandon's mom is ok. OMFG WTF JESS. I have no words for what just happened with Him and Anna. He called her beautiful tho

Aww poor Jess I feel so sorry for him. I feel very sorry for Anna too cuz of what happend to Emily

ASDFGHJKLL WAT. I can't believe he came out. Omfg WAT if there's a monster. -goes in dark corner and sobs-

This was great! PLZ continue.

The descriptions were really nice in this one, and made the whole chapter far better. I do think it's odd that Brandon wasn't concerned about her walking through the dark forest alone, and that the thing they passed wasn't mentioned again, and I now really hope that she doesn't end up with Brandon so yeah.. lol Good good

Loool! You're endings are always soo... lol! xD Run-on sentences, lack of details, snippets of humour, frequent updates, makes for neat potential. KEEEP GOINGGGGG

LOOOOOOOOOLL!11111111 This is totally hilarioussssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssssssssss

Whoah... i don't usually read this kind of story, normally people versus monster stuff isn't really my thing, but this was neat! very desciptive. although the whole event was sudden, it was HILARIOUS when she didn't remember him even though they knew each other for so long. keep going!1 want moreeeee