I liked the paragraphs about how the Bounty Hunter sleeps with his gun, because it gives us a bit of information about his way of thinking. Really liked it.

But then I got confused. I felt like there were many characters in a short time and didn't really get anything until I reread. Did they appear before? And who is the redhead?

Okay, maybe that, you're leaving as a mystery, which is good because it makes me want to read more.

I think the ending was kind of weird. The Bounty Hunter started talking? Alright...

Overall, it was a good chapter. Nice suspense when he hears the noise. I started drumming my fingers on the desk because I wanted to know when the dudes were going to appear, haha.

Didya notice I now give real reviews? :3
Expect more of it, mwahaha.

He drinks milk in a bar ahaha the Bounty Hunter is awesome.

I like how you narrate. It makes the atmosphere all westerny. If you get it.

I also liked the cliffhanger at the end. Because at first I thought it would be a filler chapter.

So far, so good. I'll be waiting for an update!

Stanley is an awesome character. I like him. Except when he killed the poor teddy bear. I wanna see more of Lewis :D

Hmm. My first western story. I really liked the beginning :D

The bounty hunter is awesome! The scene with the bartender was funny. Thought I never knew what his name was. Eh.