|Reviews for The Bounty Hunter|
| Lolitroy 5/18/13 . chapter 5
I liked the paragraphs about how the Bounty Hunter sleeps with his gun, because it gives us a bit of information about his way of thinking. Really liked it.
But then I got confused. I felt like there were many characters in a short time and didn't really get anything until I reread. Did they appear before? And who is the redhead?
Okay, maybe that, you're leaving as a mystery, which is good because it makes me want to read more.
I think the ending was kind of weird. The Bounty Hunter started talking? Alright...
Overall, it was a good chapter. Nice suspense when he hears the noise. I started drumming my fingers on the desk because I wanted to know when the dudes were going to appear, haha.
Didya notice I now give real reviews? :3
Expect more of it, mwahaha.
| Lolitroy 4/11/13 . chapter 4
He drinks milk in a bar ahaha the Bounty Hunter is awesome.
I like how you narrate. It makes the atmosphere all westerny. If you get it.
I also liked the cliffhanger at the end. Because at first I thought it would be a filler chapter.
So far, so good. I'll be waiting for an update!
| Lolitroy 3/14/13 . chapter 2
Stanley is an awesome character. I like him. Except when he killed the poor teddy bear. I wanna see more of Lewis :D
| Lolitroy 3/14/13 . chapter 1
Hmm. My first western story. I really liked the beginning :D
The bounty hunter is awesome! The scene with the bartender was funny. Thought I never knew what his name was. Eh.