|Reviews for Articulation|
| Eyes Like Blue Plastic 5/11/13 . chapter 1
Ooooooh (that's what my mouth did when I read this)
| tolerate 3/15/13 . chapter 1
I love this, especially the last sentence. Love's always burning and on fire, and now it's turning into smoke on your lips. Really interesting and clever way of writing it.
| snemes 3/12/13 . chapter 1
This is a short but powerful poem. It's so true how hard it is to say those three words. I love the imagery you use in the last line about the fire of the words turning to smoke on your lips. Great job on this write!