|Reviews for Sprint|
| Ignacio Engancha 5/1/13 . chapter 1
I never knew about this story! Wow! So well written! It's almost as good as Flicker, to me (the only reason it isn't better is that I prefer Flicker). I like the paradox and creepiness of how he is the figure. However, there is a slight gramatical confusion. Is this figure a singular person, or multiple people. Half way through, you describe it as mutiple people which really caught me off guard.
Anyway, it's a really great piece (like all of your pieces are!) Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stuff on here (WH2HE?)
| Esin of Sardis 3/22/13 . chapter 1
Good job yet again. Your stories are really interesting. I like how it's a dream and you've really managed to capture the dream-like confusion and abstract feeling in words-which can be very difficult to do. My only question is: why are you posting this (and your other story) here? As much as I love reading them online, you could seriously get these published. Find some place to submit. These are really, really good. Honestly.
Love the story and wish you luck on further writing! :)
| Watercatcher7984 3/20/13 . chapter 1
Wow. I like it! Is this a short story or the first part of a longer story?