|Reviews for Toxic Kiss|
| Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 1
that was good
| Guest 3/22/13 . chapter 6
Correction. I meant to say, is there a "get" that is supposed to go in there, as in "My place to go to get rid of my fright"?
| kiowa.v.spears 3/22/13 . chapter 8
Inspired by Pat?
| kiowa.v.spears 3/22/13 . chapter 6
I'm a little confused on the line "My place to go to rid of my fright". Is there a "give" that should've gone in there? It may be how you intended, but it just doesn't work for my brain.
| kiowa.v.spears 3/22/13 . chapter 3
I only see one thing that isn't right. You misspelled torture... But other than that, it's really good.
| kiowa.v.spears 3/22/13 . chapter 1
Aw. I love it. You're better at poetry than you gave yourself credit.