that was good

Correction. I meant to say, is there a "get" that is supposed to go in there, as in "My place to go to get rid of my fright"?

Inspired by Pat?

I'm a little confused on the line "My place to go to rid of my fright". Is there a "give" that should've gone in there? It may be how you intended, but it just doesn't work for my brain.

I only see one thing that isn't right. You misspelled torture... But other than that, it's really good.

Aw. I love it. You're better at poetry than you gave yourself credit.