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Making a Move
brokenheartedangel
2006-06-25 . chapter 1
wow i loved it! im sure alot of people can relate to that.i mean i kinda do
The-Original-Neko
2005-09-11 . chapter 1
you really should of made this longer you did the right thing by picking a subject people could relate to but i feel you could of made it more personal by useing different words
but it was nice
unforeseen
2003-11-24 . chapter 1
::clicks his teeth:: This is sad. It's happened to me before, but I lived through it. Atleast we gain experience, right? : P Good poem!
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