Nice job. nice very good i like it. Glad i didn't have to sign in..my email is so long ahh Well see you keep up the good work

Dark...figure out the rest _

Very nice!

The first three lines are incredibly strong-so strong that they could comprise a poem all by themselves. Beautiful images!

oooo i like, i like. i'm a night person by nature. i'll need to show this to some friends.

hehehe. i knew there had to be something i've not reviewed yet! lol. umm yeah, back to the poem. WOW (umm is that adequate?)

OOOH... ::gasps for air:: How creepy! I love it! This is very vampiric, did you know that? Of course you did, you wrote it! I am seriously in awe right now... That is so completely incredible. My favorite lines are "Mine or your pain/Doesn't matter". That is just so memorable. God, I love your poetry. This poem has a great sense of direction, a flow. I love how the dark went into day, and the man/boy/person got more and more destructive. I think that's awesome, that you are breaking through the barriers of cliche. Great job overall!