Wow, haha, this was funny!

i am indecently obsessed with the line "but almost doesn't count". in other news, i love the idea + tone of this poem, some of the rythms are complicated but it works really well. AHA!

definetly loved it...bravo my friend. I could actually hear the sounds of the coins.Peace

ha, this one is definatly my favourite.

That was great. I especially liked the last verse, and the repetition was cool.

reminds me of my brief career as a thief (course mine ended with getting caught and then involved a lecture and a strap of leather)

That is really well written. Love the cadence.