ha! brilliant! a true inspiration and blow to all wannabe great "writers"

beautiful.

he he, that's cool, short, simple, yet it works

cute, and so true, poetry is writing what you feel.. I always try to rhyme, but thats just because I love to rhyme...

that's awesome! real poetry is stuff like what you just wrote - stuff that makes people laugh or think or say, "hey! i never thought of it that way!" And anyway, at least you can rhyme, unlike like me (which is why i write free verse). anway... good job! i really liked it!! Ü

Unbelievably, this makes sence.

That was cute! Very true to. DAMN THE CRITICS!!!! *Goes after them with a nuclear frying pan.*