Lovin' it.

thats so awesome... oh wow... i have no words... just wow

You cried for me TWICE! How sweet! Maybe you'll cry for me more when I'm older, but til then keep writin!

*ads to favorites* this is damn good and oh-so-true.

Some good stuff here. I actually felt moved by some of the passages. There was "insight into life" thoughts here. Your poem followed a nice flow that never faltered or lost track of its focus. Nicely done too. And the last passage really made an impact, cause it summed up your ending thoughts evenly. Great job!

This is good. Kinda reminds me of the poem i wrote yesterday "stigmata" which is a bit freaky (that we wrote similar). Do you really cry a lot?...