Love the description. Painted a nice picture. I like how it is rambling, much like life in a city :)

Very cool... its kind of more of a thought process thing than a conventional poem... i like that style!

lol. do you know how many times i've felt the same way? love it...

That was so descriptive... It painted such a beautiful picture in my mind! Perfect, xoe! Luv it, as usual! But, what else is new? Hehe! Jelly-chan