|Reviews for Ice Cold|
| micartne 11/20/04 . chapter 1
That is so sad, I really liked it. It was very powerful. Your meter and rhyming were great! Woo hoo! I can't rhyme at all, just so you know. I have a knack for writing stories, but rhyming poetry is trying to make pigs fly!
| tole 11/14/03 . chapter 1
good poem keep up the good work
| MidnightBlaze 11/17/01 . chapter 1
Hmm... Very, very good. I enjoyed it, but you did contradict yourself. You said "You died without that rose; no blood, no red." and then you said, "It's lethal dark edge, stained by rose red ink." Other than that, this poem is very beautiful, and very chilling. I enjoyed it a lot, though, so keep up the great work, kiddo!
| Ayame-chan1 9/13/01 . chapter 1
Wow...cold, very moving.
| Whispering Night 6/18/01 . chapter 1
This is really great! I haven't read a lot of poetry on this site written by guys, and yours was a great oen to start with! Stylistically, the "ice cold" at the beginning of each stanza was great, it really tied everything together in the end. I hope to read more of your stuff!
| w. a. monaghan 6/18/01 . chapter 1
Whoo, funky. This one's neat, gives a good mood setting and overall picture. Kinda makes you wonder 'bout the whole story behind this, great work. _