That made me think of my boyfriend and I. You have a really good talent. Keep it up!

whoa, i like it. i thought it was interesting how you said 'Staining us with its cleansing breaths', strange thought, to be staind and cleansed at the same time, but rain does that. honestly, great job.

hmm. i think i like the imagery (damn you're so good at taht) more than the words/idea. i dunno/i'm psycho