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mooseyx3 2005-04-28 . chapter 3
haha! cool. Aye, you're poor teacher, so clueless!

*peace*
Shade2 2003-12-02 . chapter 3
Heh, these were pretty clever. Yes, playing with Lit. teacher's minds is oh so fun . . . No mechanical errors that I could see . . . power to the dead pedestrian chickens!
fearphobic 2003-08-11 . chapter 3
haha, kool stories. man, ur teacher sounds kinda dumb...lol. i like ur style of writing...=)
LittleSalem 2003-04-19 . chapter 1
That was a very cute, and inspirational story. You should consider being a novelist.
Snowshoe Hare 2001-11-26 . chapter 3
Quite amusing. The incongruity of the connection is one of the most amusing aspects, of course. It would be neat to have a pedestrian chicken in all of your stories -- sort of a trade mark, if you will -- though maybe just in the background. (maybe there could be a race of them)
Kara Angelle 2001-11-17 . chapter 3
*smile* I like this, the entire chicken trilogy is very cute. I like Astell, and her struggle between popularity and where she is really needed. I wish they had let her keep the cup, though.
Kara Angelle 2001-11-17 . chapter 2
heehee! This is sooo cute! I like how you linked them, and the somewhat obscure reference to the poor pedestrian chicken(who got made into stew) was funny.
Kara Angelle 2001-11-17 . chapter 1
*grins* this is cute, I love his out-look on life, very funny. hehe, I doubt your English teacher was paying attention to what he was reading, that's hilarious that he didn't even notice.
Nakato Rune 2001-07-23 . chapter 3
I like them! You're lucky to have an English teacher who actually assignes fiction. Mine (at least last year) was really into essays--"How I relate to Socrates", stuff like that. You're very good at short stories.
ArwenStar914 2001-07-21 . chapter 3
Heeheeheeheehee!!!!!I liked the author's note the best!! Haha!! Hmm, interesting, heehee, you certainly, haahaa, have some funny ideas, heehee! Oh dear, I can't stop laughing hahahahahaha!!!!!! Poor mr meyer!! hahahahaa! *wipes tears from her eyes as she attempts to compose heself* er, ahem, yes, anywhoo.... =) Otay, good job, I'm kinda sad the trilogy is over though... *sigh* ah well. Update more of your stories!! Pwease? =D tanx. I'm off to work on my Cinderella story and FFW (and maybe even Snow White, my, aren't I an adventerous one? ;)). Tata! **ArwenStar**
ArwenStar914 2001-07-05 . chapter 2
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! Poor Mr. Meyer!!!! Yes, it was strange... actually, sounded a lot like some of my writings! Heehee. Very nice, can't wait for the finale! (oh, and the PEDESTRIAN CHICKEN comes back to life, right? ghost chicken, what a thought! LoL) Namariƫ! **ArwenStar**
Ghost 2001-06-30 . chapter 1
Hehehe. Reminds me of the saying: The Pessimist says, "It can't get any worse then this!" while the Optimist responds "Oh, yes it can!"
ArwenStar914 (well would ya look at that, forget to sign in again. I'd lose my arm if it wasn't screwed on ;)) 2001-06-21 . chapter 1
hehehehehehe, poor Mr- uh teacher. ;) He probly did read it and then just didn't make the connection. heehee. I like how pessimistic he is, heehee. You must post more soon, I want to know about the pedestrian chicken!!!!! Okay, me go now. Bye bye.
*ArwenStar*
Kathryn Angelle - not signed in, but looky at my stuff anyway? *grovels* 2001-06-20 . chapter 1
Heehee...PEDESTRIAN CHICKEN!!!! VERY unique, I have NEVER read anything like it, Mwahahahaha! btw...1) you have a pic of Aria??? If I plead and beg and cry, will you email it to me? 2) I'm requesting pics of my Belonging to Someone characters from an artist named Norma Peters (email me for link) who does them for free (it would be months and months though) and I wanted your permission and a description for her to do Aria (it would be Aria and Frodo. The other pics are [and these are spoilers, but...] Rhian/Jonathan, Erin/Legolas, Bryan/Rosie). Bye now! -Kat
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