   Lady Psycho 14 2006-01-19 . chapter 1Hi there I just want 2 say that this story is goin' 2 B absolutly gr8t. Can't wait 4 mo! |
 pewpewpera fah wef 2004-02-16 . chapter 1Command?! You dare command me to do something...! Err, okay. How intresting. It goes a little fast and I would like more description of the scenery, but other than that it's good. Update soon or I shall stab you with a rusty spork...
~Midnight Predator~ |
 Pyro-girl 2002-02-14 . chapter 1OOOOOOOOOOOOOH! Keep going! This is too good! |
 Kiti 2001-06-23 . chapter 1 I loved it. Please write more! |
 Nephthyskelly 2001-06-20 . chapter 1Great story and very creative! Write more soon! |
| Lynx 2001-06-20 . chapter 1 Hey this is really great, I hope you continue to write it. Keep up the good work! ~8^) |
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