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| XxmArgZiExX 2006-08-01 ch 3,  | abuseHuh.. interesting. You should come back and write some more. Your last update was more than five years ago!! Crazy, man. Please, come back! -Margaret |
| XxmArgZiExX 2006-08-01 ch 2, | abuseSo, I'm guessing that the little girl will be important later on in the story? |
| XxmArgZiExX 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm... I must admit, I think you could've made the first chapter more attention-grabbing, but you know I'll read on anyway. |
| Ravyn Darklighter 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI like it, though it's kinda short. |
| Shoujo Kitsune 2004-07-16 ch 3, | abuseWhat an intoresting stoping point. Good so far. You should read my story "The Chorus of Fate." I don't know if you would like it, but I'd be intorested to hear what you think. |
| Enya Oireag 2003-06-11 ch 3, | abuseCool story! Get more up soon! What happens to Nyx? Tell me tell me! |
| Lady-Black-Moon 2002-10-11 ch 2, | abuseonce again, awesome!!!! you are really talented at writing, and it's soooo interesting to read yoru stuff!!! |
| Lady-Black-Moon 2002-10-11 ch 1, | abusethat is sooo good!!!!! i can't wait to get to move on to the next chapter!!!!! |