Hey Kuri, great poem. I would have guessed wolverine or fisher (pretty close, same family). I'm obsessed with all of those :^) Anyway, keep up the good work!
Cody,
~Abhorsen~
2002-12-30 . chapter 1
I think that's very interseting, and my first thought when you said "Can you guess what animal this is about?" was not a cat—which is kinda weird because I absolutely LOVE cats and everything to do with em'— but Fox. I was wrong in that guess however too. I like this pome a lot!! Keep up the good work.
Very good! It all flowed nicely and everything. I thought it was a leopard at first! But then I wondered how likely it was that a leopard lived in the snow. (I'm kind of glad the bird got away because I like birds.)
Nianca (look me up!) 2001-06-22 . chapter 1
I really like it, there's something primal about it, probably because of the sentence structure.
The flow is good, and I like how you describe the hunt ^.^