I like this story, stop being lazy and get to work, please and thank you sir : )

Flick reminds me of the Phantom of the Oprea for some odd reason could be the mask or the amber eyes and the bit about mudering people.

In love with a madman, Gemma

arn't you like related to Craig,alan,?

this story is awesome... you should totally read ours if u ever have time.

excellent. great pace.

Someday you should continue this story because it's good. Just think about such things.
--the many authors

Cool story!

Well, it doesn't seem as though you've been here in awhile, but I really like this story. It's well written, well paced, and very interesting. I would love to see it continued. ;)

Great story! I hope that you will make more to it soon. I really liked it. Write more soon.
later,
MYSTERY

AN ASSASIN! SWET! This is awesome! Oh, I hope she takes off her mask and is ogly.that would be cool! :) "Only those with weaknesses to hide, drink."-That is so true. Too true. Well, write on!

so why haven't u been wking much on this story, huh? i'd actually rather find out the rest of this than HP #7. really intriguing :) (i love that wd) neways, hope u update it soon (stern look)
;)
later!

Excellent story, I like the renegade persona that she portrays. Keep up the good work, there aren't many that can introduce a character so well in the first chapter. I look forward to the following chapters.

~ Ky

I will be interested to see what the mask is all about. Also i am wondering, did you just through the well scene in for something to say, or is there going to be a story behind that?

I'm likeing this story more, and more... Is that a bad thing?

I loved the second chapter more than the first! I really like this story so please please ::puppy dog eyes:: please keep writting it. Hurry up with the 3rd chapter! -Assassin Lady Darkness