Beautifully mad.

This one-shot makes me want to buy Wicked! In fact, I just did today. lOl. I wanted to read this before I started that one though.

I can't believe we still have pimps. O.o I can't help but wonder how they can be happy with that lifestyle, to each their own, but it becomes a problem if they start spreading something. O.O

Oh my, the detail in this is . . . beautiful in a twisted way. Just my style! 8D

I actually believe animals have souls. XD I'm a big time animal lover. Though I'm not really religious, I'm very open-minded. ;D

O.O those poor children! I can understand where the idea come from, children embody innocence. -nods- but still...poor children!

Wow, karma comes to mind with this ending. You reep what you sew, or something like that. She got tricked into her own oven. Ironic. I would pity her, had she not eaten children, but this was still...twistingly beautiful. I love it. XD

SMOOCHES
MUCH LOVE

You are such a great writer with such an addictive style of writting! I must say this story is hauntingly amazing, a bit creepy, though, because canabalism is spooky and your vivid style of writing adds to the goosebumps. :) But I really love your stories, all of them! You did a terrific job weaving your characters into life! This tale is much more darker than Chaperon, powerful and enchanting. Brilliant (^~^)

This was an amazing story. So well written and conceived. Nice work. :)

amazing penmanship...i respect you as a writer even more now.

This is probably your best story. simply brill!

Again, you never cease to amaze me. I like the way you made shallow fairy tales seemed 'real' like. I love the way you deepened their characters. The witch's side is truly...truly...twisted? But in a good way. At least I could understand why she did those things. Also, Hansel and Gretel didn't seem that good here. Love your works and I could only pray that I have the same talent as yours because maybe almost all your readers who wanted to become writers would wished to be you.

The second to last paragraph, the second sentences, it says: 'I should see bodies buried in ice, only their heads revealed above the tundra, (*) heir (their) mouths hanging open as they ask the question that surges up from my soul.

O.o Uh...a bit gruesome and eccentric, but interesting. This is the first time I've ever read a type of story like this so, I'm staring at the words, forcing myself to comprehend the material I've read.

wow such a powerful piece...I NEVER thought of the witch's experience and you've sure opened my eyes! This is something similar to what I read about the wolf with Little Red Riding Hood but not as dark. This is quite believable, you know, and seeing that the Grimm Brothers never wrote the witch's side, I'll definitely have to go with this one :). Wonderfully written, very plausible, very powerful. Must be added to favs.

--MizSphinx

This is, without a doubt, the most disturbing thing I have ever read. Ever.
I don't even WANT to know where you got the idea for it from. Being - purified - by - eating - children!?!
That is so sick. Don't get me wrong, it's well written and a clever idea and all, but... eugh. It's twisted.
If you were vegetarian, you could get your meat-eating friends to read this; I bet it would completely convert them. I think I might do that actually. My useless whining of "but it was alive!" hasn't made any of my friends think twice about their diets so far. I mean, I know it's their decision and all, but I like to mess with people's heads.
Thank you, you've just handed me a brilliant weapon. xDD

This is amazing. Haunting and gruesome and horrifying and beautiful and amazing. I feel so much for the protagonist. Her life tale is gripping, probing the mind with the question of how clear-cut the fine line between good and bad really is, and how ignorant people can be when dealing with a so-called 'villain'.
I've attempted to write how I feel about this for about five minutes now and have failed miserably - so I leave you with appreciation, and a final note of just how powerful your last couple of paragraphs were, about bodies buried in ice. Ooh. I'm shivering.
Once again: amazing.

OMG... I can't believe it. This was horrifying, and yet, I still love it. I shall never, ever look at any version of Hansel and Gretel again. 8|

i usually don't pay attention to the extremely lengthy one-shots, but yours was addicting! Nice

Wow I've never read this story through her eyes. It's interesting. Very well writen. Good job!

This reminds me a bit of Neil Gaiman's 'Snow, Glass, Apples'.
I like your integration of the Russian Baba Yaga into the German fairytale.