Hahahaha! Way to go girl! Good technical skill except that I kept getting confused with who was talking. Love the story!

Great story. The start was real dramatic but it became more and more fun. A kind of fun, that, well, keept it's seriousness in it... It might even be a true story. But I must say you cracked me up with;
"Don't you know those things give you cancer?" He paused, then his lips crinkled into a sneer.
I really enjoyed it!

I thought it was superbly written and very interesting. Your a GREAT writer, it made me think. Check some of my stuff out sometime.

that was amusing. I like the idea of Death being all fussy about it. ^^
Good job.
-A+B

That was Goofy! Are you planning on writing more?

I feel sorry for Death. He's had a bad day, poor guy. And if an unstoppable force can be outwitted by a teenager, it might be time for a job replacement. Hey, his tenure is indeterminate! But this was a really good story.

lol ok, that was slightly weird... did you ever read any Discword books, by any chance? Death in them is the COOLEST character! Espeacially in MORT... but I'll shut up because you probably don't know what I'm talking about. :)

That's cute!