wowza O.o I reads all your poems but thought better review this one so it has that little "review" button next to the title to make the poem look even better to the shallow reader:P hehehe i LOVE your descriptions though! *throws on some stealth outfit, sneaks around.. and steals them bwwwahahahah!* j/k. I have one teeny tiny suggestion for the ending, you know just to make it sound longer and not so cut off you could put something like "like a sudden death" or something. bah i dunno i'm not too hot at poetry anyway. ^.^;; Your poems are so beautfil, please don't stop writing! *slaps herself for rambling too long*