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Reviews For: The Lost One

Eclipsia Soulbird 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuselol, We can't buy alcohol in the US if we're under 21. Considering they just graduated high school, I'd assume they're only 18. But seeing as there was no mention of alcohol anyway, I don't know why I even brought that up. It's good. I feel sorry for Sandra. I'd hope you would continue this so Jamie and Sandra could end up together, but at the same time I appreciate the tragedy. Very well-written. I easily "connect" with Sandra, so wonderful characterization. Great job!
Waterfall 2004-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThat is just so sad! Now I'm depressed... why haven't anyone told him? That's the kind of stuff friends tell each other, isn't it? And why is the bartender called Jack? The bartender is always called Jack... Anyway, very well written with your usual surprising twist at the end. I like the scentence "She gave him a Look" - it says it all. Shade and sweet inspiration, Waterfall
miss ballerina 2002-08-01 ch 1,	abusepretty good. all right, great. if your not from america, where are you from?
amamiya 2002-02-01 ch 1,	abuseAwww, that's so depressing, but I'm glad it's realistic, unlike those crappy 'they lived happily ever after' endings. I don't think you needed those -Changing Pov- thingies. Damn! I feel so sorry for Jamie. The idiot.
All Mighty Terrestrial 2002-01-24 ch 1,	abuseIt was HIM? (laughs evilly) That was a twist. Cool story.
Innomen Toast Crunch 2001-07-05 ch 1,	abuseHey you! (It's better than hey whatever your name is) I was the first to review!!!! I'm so proud. So, back to the story, it's not done, is it? I mean, there will be more, cause I gotta know what Jamie does and all. And loads of thanks for that "Mt. Everest" sized review. Okay, It wasn't that big, but I don't expect any more that size so that's wut it's like to me. Anyways, loved the story and all. P.S~ the name's Bailey, in case you wanted to know.

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