|Reviews for Shed a Tear|
| Liquid Gold 1/31/04 . chapter 1
that is an excellent poem. every verse is well written and emotional, and the final stanza "the pain i went through was for you/the tears i had shed were for me" is revealing and piercing and captures the emotion and claims it beautifully.
| rose323 4/18/03 . chapter 1
this is really excellent. I like the last two lines especially. Wow, great work. Keep writing.
| Nicki 7/7/01 . chapter 1
Great poem...well written :) sweet and meaningful
| laksdjfls 7/6/01 . chapter 1
right on! the ending two lines are soo effective
| Kuri 7/6/01 . chapter 1
Wow. VERY nice... isn't it strange how things can turn around in an instant?
| Lily Shoukwho is too lazy to sign in 7/6/01 . chapter 1
i was skeptical as to whether i wanted to read this-there are so many badly written soppy poems out there-but from the first line of yours i knew that this wasn't one of them. this poem takes you through a story. you don't just feel one emotion, you feel it all. you have expressed yourself so well that i felt all the pain you went through, and i felt as if it was I in your shoes. i love your ending to this poem- 'I realize that the pain i went through was for you/And the tears i had shed were for me.' this is a powerful ending to a powerful poem! thank you!