I've been reading your stuff for a while and it's amazing. It's nice to know that there's other people out there feeling the same way. You're a fantastic writer.

you know, i take a copy of this poem everywhere with me. To collage, shopping, to the cinema, out clubbing, because when that moment comes (as it always does) when i think for a second that i can't take anymore, that if cnt take anymore of anything, i read it. It touches my soul more than any of your other poems (which is incredibly hard to do!). It reminds me that everyone feels pain, its just some of us feel it more often, and more deeper than others. When i need someone to relate to, when i feel alone i read it. It is so beautiful and fragile and twisted and incredible. Everytime i read it, it blows my mind away. this is amazing, awe-inspiring and keeps me striving on. This is incredible, you're incredible. Kepp writing.

It is almost creepy how that poem reminded me of me. It is exactly what goes through my head when I cut. I just need to do it to make everything better, but after I finish I feel guilty and soon the pain comes back and it's worse then b4. I have tried to quit so many times, but I always break down and cut. I am trying right now and it has been one week. I feel like I am going insane when I can't cut, but I think that in the end I will feel better... I know that I will break down soon thoguh...

u r fucking good!

Your poetry is absolutely beautiful. I love your writing style. The metaphors you used of Dragons in flight was absolutely gorgeous. I'm sad and disappointed that you've decided to stop writing poetry and that I discovered you so late; you have a lot of talent. Hope life brings you the joy and luck that you deserve.

Aileen

wow. just wow.

It's great! Well, I totally agree with all the other reviewers and I'm too lazy to write it again. _ - CU, Twincast aka. "the lazy baka who's addicted to Gravitation and proud of it" _

Extremely powerful! Never seen anything like it! When other people write about depression, they leave out all the details, but you put them all in, and made the poem a success! Awesome job. However I'm troubled - you don't cut yourself do you? I hope not. Don't be sad, you're a wonderful person, and you deserve to be happy always! I've also missed reading your stuff, but now I'm back, and I'll keep in touch! Wonderful job, as always!

I know what you mean. I have such great aspirations sometimes, but then I'm always too lazy to follow through with them.

Wow that was amazing... I could really feel it and I think it's one of the best things you've written (that means its bloody good!). I can identify with what you mean and cutting and trying to give up and all. I really really felt sorry for you when I read this. I hope you're ok, its a shame your email address is privcate but at least I can read your great poems!

Very sad and beautiful. The rythm was exceptional. It really drew my attention to the important parts so I read the words. Powerful and beautiful. Very expressive and from the heart. One of the best poems I have ever read.