I really like how you wrote this poem ... you did a good job of feeling of falling ... to depressing ... what am i saying? good job!
R & R one of mine?

I'm Anti-Goth.
Bite me.
*rolls eyes*
It's poems like these that ruin ones perception of you.

wow...that was amazing......i'm speechless.....~Melz

It was good, it sounds like you were frustrated lol. I really liked it! ummm....remember that time at band camp when i shoved a clarinet up marlow's **? uhh...me either...anyway email me sometime at i_f***ed_yomama@lesbianlove.net ok...umm...got any gwapes? umm....if you fill that stump over there with acorns i'll give you two dollars.... umm...ok, i have nothing else to say now *kisses yo donkey*