aw what a cheesy but fun one Keep writing! _ JMBunny

Yes, corny, but in a cute way. Corniness is, like, the best. _;; Hmm, I noticed that there are a couple weird comma splices in your poems... then again, I have none in my poems and that sometimes makes it difficult to understand. Some of your punctuation isn't necessary, and it merely detracts from the intended flow.

Love most certainly does not rule. As a matter of fact it sucks monkey ballz. Ha. Anyway, nice poem. Rather, er, fluffy, but that can be a good thing.

hey you are forcing your rhymes a little bit but all in all it was a good poem

I like. *giggles crazily* I'm kinda hyper now. Anyway, you're a good poet.