Make sure to proof read because typos really hurt the feeling that the poem gives, which is really good by the way

It ends kinda abrubt, consider adding more? Loved the rhyming and it gave a dark but wonderful picture

Hmmm. It leaves you thinking. It sounds like the narrator is a young child, and the way the poem analyzes the concentration camps only furthers that sentiment. Makes you wonder if the narrator has found the answers to the questions! Well done!

Ohmigod, I can barely bear to read this. I hate the concentration camps so much, all that they represent. I'm so pathetic I'm crying now, and I even cried when we watched a video on it in Global Studies. Your poem is so touching...thank you so much.

Again a great poem. U r really good keep written