This is a great poem! I love it! Great job, keep it up!

~dragonzz~

M... I actually had a dream like this a couple of nights ago (hehe). Your rhymes are great!

That has happened to me before... You have a FABULOUS dream and then you realise- IT'S A DREAM!!! NooOoOoOo

Sailor Lita

Repitition is always a good thing! I am, again, impressed with your talent. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

I love this style with the repitition, it really centers the poem and portrays your theme well.

Great poem write more

Aw, this was a sweet dream ^.^ Very nice! I like how you described certain parts like "My heart had been blown up". Continue with more ne?

Again, I can relate. You're a great poet, keep it up!