Awww, that is ONCE AGAIN really good! *mutters under breath jealously*

Very good but indescibable for a summary- I see what you mean!

*Die, you good writer dies!*

Sailor Lita
-your fan

hellooo.. i like this poem very much for the way it brings across such poignancy in simple terms. it is no wonder you are a published writer =)

Foggy night is the perfect setting for these feelings. Good pick!