It would be heartless to criticise this, and I don't intend to. Blunt and to the point, delivers the message quite brutally. Even without the context it is good.

good poem, very true your feelings. i felt the same way when my grandfather died. we were pals. like i said very good poem!!

Awwww, that is so sad.

I was close to taers but I am an emotional person! I am so sorry, for you. It is a very good poem though!

Sailor Lita
-your fan

Ohmigosh this is soo sad I almost cried.I'm sorry about your friend,I understand how you feel,very beautiful poem.

Oh my goodness, this is beautiful. I understand the feeling...I've been there several times. I hope everything turns out good for you...excellent expression of that feeling you get when someone that you love dies.

How did your friend die? This poem really intruiges me.