 emeraldrealm 2006-07-12 . chapter 1I like this poem. Although you get the point across, it lacks a bit of emotion - for the title, anyway. It has good rhythm, is well rhymed, and is easily relative. All things considered, it is a great piece of work - because it is yours, and because I know that in writing it you have accomplished peace of mind of the situation, even if it was just a little bit! Good Work! keep them coming! |