   Daisy Silk 2006-06-05 . chapter 1beautiful beginning-ful of possiblites-Please continue@! |
 PeanutPals 2005-07-06 . chapter 1oo! wow, u must continue this, it looks vair vair interesting! i like it lots, so far! check out my page, RomanceBabe (no, not peanutpals...although u can look at that one too...if ur really bored, lol) update soon! |
 annie 2002-08-19 . chapter 1 Myriad men! Not myriad OF men! |
| annie 2002-08-19 . chapter 1 Myriad men! Not myriad OF men! |
 Lady Galaxy1 2002-06-10 . chapter 1Good start. It intrigues the reader about what will happen next. But can I ask one thing? Please please don't let Adeline Celeste Marie Languedorf have a step mother. I don't like them. They spoil the stories. Get the next chapter out soon please! |
 waterlily4 2001-12-07 . chapter 1That was great. I am interested in reading more. |
| Anonymus 2001-11-14 . chapter 1 Beautiful... absolutely beautiful... I LOVE it!! Please continue! ^_~ |
 Harlequinn 2001-09-16 . chapter 1It was gripping. And its nice to finally have a story set in Luxembourg. Go Luxembourgers! |
| Paris 2001-07-22 . chapter 1 the prologue has me hooked. please add some chapters!! |
 ChrstnWrtr 2001-07-17 . chapter 1Cool. Keep writing
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| SeltsamerDrache 2001-07-17 . chapter 1 Can't wait till lyou get some chapters up! The prologue is great! I have a bit of trouble with prologues myself |
| Ice Dream 2001-07-17 . chapter 1 Wow!! Beautiful story!!!! Keep writing!!!! It's great! |
 dawn9 2001-07-17 . chapter 1Sounds like a really good start, please continue. |
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