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| d 2008-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuselame. stop writing. |
| Happy Pill 2006-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseBeautifully written. |
| seraphim-rush 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, but I agree with one of the reviewers on the fact that the ending was a bit abrupt. It kind of confused me and if it had been more 'flowy' then you might've earned some tears from me. =p It's too bad we won't know who the killer was. V_V I liked how he died at the exact moment that the clock struck 2. Very nice touch. ~seraphim-rush |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseSuch a sad and beautiful story.I hate how people can be so narrow-minded.Great job! :) |
| Puesdonym 2005-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh...My..God... I can't believe people could be so cruel, so slosed minded.. so stupid... Wow, I'm so torn between anger and saddness i'm nearly speechless. This story was truly touching and such a harsh blast of truth. It's actually something I know people would do yet being the sheltered and rather oblivious person I am it always comes as a horrible shock when I hear of these kinds of things happening. WOW... amazing. |
| sdfds 2005-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseum...ok |
| kuroi-urufu 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abuseNo! Damn stupid people. Stop hate crimes kill the homophobs! Poor Johanna... |
| Alexander 2005-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI... I'm speechless... This story... is one of the best stories I've read in a long while... Absolutely wonderful... It touched me, and brought tears to my eyes, after bringing pain to my heart. Shxt like this happens more often than not, and it's people like you who bring the problem into focus. Once again, wonderful job, this is going into my faves |
| Tate Soyker 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. The ending was a bit abrupt and confusing (Who shot Chris? How did the shooter get into the house? Not really important stuff but it made it somewhat awkward to not have those little details.) Also, most colleges especially ones for the fine arts are more excepting of homosexuality and often have clubs for bi-gay-lesbians. I really liked this story though, especially the brother-sister support and love. It was nicely written. |
| Chistery 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseA harsh reminder of reality. 'Twas well written in addition. Nice job. |
| jes 2005-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg... that was so sad...i am fully in tears... god why can't people just exept people for eho they are?? gr... that was briliant |
| Nanners 2005-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad. It really shows how horrible intolerence is. It was a very interesting viewpoint, too. Anyway, this was a good story. I loved how you made Johanna so...innocent. That was cute. |
| aeolyn 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a sad story! Beautifully written, yet it brings tears to my eyes. Great Job. |
| empath89 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abusethat's so sad...you nearly made me cry. they were so happy and then some homophobe shot him...and johanna was such a good character. so innocent, but smarter than many people. luved it...goes on my fave's list! |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abusethats so sad, i like it though, and it makes a very good point. -Naomi |