that was soo good

As usual, your work is amazing! I know exactly how you feel, too. i'm very envious at your talent for song writing--having tried it a couple times, i now know how difficult it is--you have so much that has to rhyme, has to fit a certain rhythm...yet, you've accomplished that!I like the sort of vortex at the end (one thing i've become fascinated with recently is making poetry in shapes that also express the emotion captured in the poem) 'your words, they peeled me raw/ closing that damn door/close the door./the door.' powerful!!

i was reading your list of hot guys---and i thought, just for the hell of it, i would give you my own!! they are varied-and with a few i'm being realistic (or a little bit more so) and throwing them in because i think they're rather cute and are my own age!

Keanu Reeves
Jamie Bell
Prince Harry Windsor

oooh and i was wondering-did edward norton play opposite brad pitt in fight club? if so (and i think i'm right)then i love him too, and he IS one of the best actors out there! what else is he in??

anyways, love you songs, love your poetry, off to read another!
peace, love, happiness, and good will on earth
~katy~ (aka lily shouk)