hey!im liking this, esp the bit in the first verse 'your smile is tearing me apart/and all i do is stare at the telephone', it seems like two completely unrelated sentences but they make sense together.though im not sure about the bits in brackets - is that meant to be sung by background singers or something?keep up the good work:)

xx julia

Oh, lovely song. ^_^ Kudos, kudos...! XD I find it very very very... very... nice. Hehehehe. o.o; But, now I want to hear the tune... *lament lament*

that was good

wow......this is a really good song......