 Vooda Tribal 2001-08-29 . chapter 1 Interesting! I like this story, it's quite good. There's only a few little things I would like to point out: First of all, in the beginning, you wrote that it was in aincient times. And yet, how did he get a gun? And where did the WWF come from? (Not the Wrestling one, the Wildlife one!) I'm really sorry to be a nit-picker, I don't like being one, but I just wanted to point these things out... It's a great story, even with these little "points", keep writing, please! |