If you don't think your poems are good you should read mine, they truly suck. I like this one, I try to be different in my own quiet way. Why? Because I tried to be like everyone else once and it didn't work. I'm different what can I say?

This is not what I expected, which is a good thing. The eloquence you can convey in your style of writing is beautiful.

hello, i really like your poem and at the moment i am doing an assignment on conformity and i was wondering if you would allow me to use your poem as an expression of what it is like for people trying to accepted by society. i think your poem expresses this very well. So could you please e-mail me with your answer. I fully understand if you wouldn't like me to use it. ciao Pix

very good, and very true. I wrote a peom sort of like that, but not really, mine more involves one person than yours does. I like that a lot. (by the way, on one of my reviews on another of your poems, it didn't turn out right. it sent before i was done, sorry)

OH wow that's amazing...u are a talented writer