Interesting poem. SOrt of reminds me of TS Elliot

I thought it was pretty good. kind of inspiring actually.

Nice poem. Have you ever had any of these published? If not, you might want to consider it. They are good.

Nice poem.

Very nice.

Excellent poem!!! :)

been there, isn't it dreadful and wonderful? always wanted to write a poem about how it felt, but thought everyone would think me a sad teenager...but this doesnt strike me as sad. i think your real strength shows in the more freeform stuff i've read in the previous six poems, but this is great too, and very genuine. like it!

i like this...why are relationships like this so addictive? really good, i like the way its so spontaneous seeming, like a train of thought wihtouut it being forced into any structure. And the imagery is ggood too. totally individual, never read anything like this before. Thanks!

those were the 4 weirdest poems ive ever read, but they wre great! keep it up