Ooo! I like, I like. It really sums up why I do things that drive my parents mad without quite knowing why. It's really confusing, sometimes(not the poem, not the poem), because you feel the need to push the lines, and yet you don't quite dare go too far, and there's all these other things pulling you in different directions - enough of my ranting! Keep writing, and dye your hair blue anyways!

I love the depth of your writing....you did it cus yer parents wouldnt let you dye you hair blue! that kills me! ha ha...not flaming you though. I rather liked it. I just recently got flipped on because of a little escaped I had with my friends putting humorour signs all over town....societ just cant take a joke somtimes, and they dont like to accept the weird...although blue hair is FAR from werid. Anyways...keep it up!