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| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseI like the end. |
| Blackout12 2002-02-18 ch 1, | abuseHey, it's some nice great writing. Interesting events, storyline, which I can never write. Short stuff. Maybe for a new fic, you should make a long chapter one. |
| blurryvision 2001-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI read this when you posted it, but I didn't get to review then so I'm doing it now. I usually don't read short stories, but I really like this one. Well, I guess that's all, good job. peace out |