It's not that sad

Oh my . I feel terribly sorry for that girl . I feel sorry for everyone who was killed at such a horrible time . I thank you so much for writing this story . Thank You .

Thats so sad... She got really far though, all the way outside? Makes me wanna cry...

Excellent writting, love the ending, very sudden, great job! .

Man sharon why the hell do u insist on making me cry during school? it isnt nice...i loved it though!so did she die then?

man i can not believe i finally got into the school lmc...anyways i will talk to u after school..love u bye...

Kim

im only reviewing cause your making me review! well.. i liked the story, its very informative and sad!

Very good toching,

Even made me sad. Ur a great writer!

Well done morgan! I havent read a story for ages, but i remember that that level quality work is conidered damn good!

OMG that is such a sad story, It was good though! Go morgan!

Hey Sharon! I like this story alot, it is a very nicely done first person narrative. Keep up the great work!

Two things: I think you mispelled the name of the concentration camp, and you need to vary the length of your sentences. Other than that, a moving piece.

very cool and sad

Wow this is a touching story. I like how she is so scared to die that she runs and the result is what she feared.

This is such a sad story. You really brought out what people would think or do.

This is very nice. Keep up the great work!