wait, did we find out why she was kidnapped yet? wouldn't she have bee more curious about why she was stolen?

This is interesting, but (don't hurt me) i do like your london story much more. i think it was written better, but this one is okay. i do want to know what happens with Lorrayne!

That is a beautiful story! I can't wait to read more. Please update.

write more soon

A charming story. I hope you will hurry with the next chapter soon.

This is quite cool, Emma! I'm liking it a lot, actually. You have a few little grammar and word choice issues (suit and suite are not the same thing, ^^;), but it's really good. You need to write more! I want to meet the knight! *throws a fit* Keep it up! --Kate

Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Wow, thanks for dedicating this chapter to me!

Thank God!! ff.net finally let me on again. Next chapter! Yay! Thanks for replying to my other review. Well, this one was good. I like background.

Ooooooo... The title and summary caught my attention.. I love this so far.. Very appealing.. I hope there are more chapters coming soon cuz I can't wait!

Great story! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Wow!!!! Great story!! Please keep writing!!!! Please!!!!! This is a great story!!!

I like! Very good description, and the intro rocks!

Nice. Post more soon! Poor Lorrayne. I do have a few questions, though. If it's not Earth, where is it? How is it different than Earth? You mention the ancient Greek goddess, so is it ancient Greece? Who are the parents of the girls? Is Calath happy about the marriage? And Lorrayne--not that I didn't like her, but she kind of seemed too perfect. Does she have a secret? Don't take this as criticism! I'm just curious. I'd be happy to get a reply, or maybe see answers in coming chapters. Oh, boy, this is getting way long...