ow, its soo kewl and fluffy =^.^=
one suggestion though (jsut me being my self =S )
Trapped in my hand
could be
Trapped within my hand
jsut a suggestion, better 2 ignore it as its brillant the way it is.
your an awesome poet. =)

Heh, cute. The contrasts between the preferences of the cloud(s) really bring out the stroung point of your poem. Keep writing.

-Euro-=-

oooooh ^^ heeheee...;;; I liked it- even though I have no idea what it means;;;;;; I'm not a poem person;;; which is EXACTLY why I'm reviewing;;; um... 'night?? *yawns*

This is a signed review, I'm lazy Mizuko. ^_^ This is a great poem. You are quite the poet. Good job!