 Raven5 2004-01-09 . chapter 1So bittersweet. :) I like your style. |
 hmmm 2003-04-25 . chapter 1 this is a chainletter type poem.
just add the girl/boy being run over by a drunk driver and then put DON'T DRINK AND DRIVE in the end and voila! chainletter |
 Princess Jupiter 2002-01-29 . chapter 1ooooo this is really sad!! :(
anyways keep up the good work!! :) |
 Atroxx 2001-12-26 . chapter 1Great poem, that would really suck to be that girl. |
 Yabber Gurl 2001-07-27 . chapter 1this is kinda sad...but its a good poem. |