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| neverraven 2005-05-16 ch 6,  | abuseI love it. I can't wait for the next chapter please continue. I would give you some advice but you write so well I might screw up the perfection. |
| Kiwee 2005-04-27 ch 6, | abusethat's very nice of him...the poor kid needs a break... update~! love this story! and all the others, too... |
| jes 2005-02-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseomg that was really good.. keep on writing! |
| empath89 2004-11-21 ch 6, | abuseaww, that is such a good story. too good to be abandoned. plz, update as soon as posible. i luv all the characters and the writing style is awsome. |
| Ilana 2004-06-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseOk. I like this story. Please continue |
| Germaine Amundsen 2003-11-17 ch 6, | abuse*big smiley smile* Yay! Oh, goodness, yay! I'm so happy! You're such a great writer... |
| ColdDaye 2003-11-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseI just discovered this story and it rocks! Don't leave me hanging like this - how does Johanna come into the plot - what happens with Mike, Chris, and Evans - what's next?! |
| ArPlAyMaTeMy 2003-07-30 ch 6, | abuseAw! This is adorable! I really like Evan, and Chris, and Mike. I don't like Johanna that much, but I've always hated female characters. This fictionn is so cute you've got to continue. Aw I wanna pinch Evan's cheeks...not tellin which ones. ;-) |
| I Am The Bunny Slayer 2003-06-27 ch 6, | abuseOOh OOh OOh! PRONGS! You should update this, it's really good. Absolutly loving Chris and Mike. They are so adorable. Please update. It's to cute to be abandoned like it seems to have been, lol. Zhai'helleva. ~Tris |
| erinisyourdaddy 2003-06-16 ch 6, | abuseoh sounds good so far!! i want another chapter! i love mike and chris, so disgustingly sweet hehe. and evans, the tall (i dunno), dark, and handsome orphan. yummy. update soon! |
| Sarah 2003-06-12 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat was a nice beginning. Too bad you never finished it. |
| Courteney 2002-08-23 ch 6, | abuseI really like this. I'm trying to write some original stuff too, not just HP all the time, but I'm finding it difficult to come up with an idea. I remembered that you had some original work in your profile so I came to have a look and get some inspiration. I hope you continue this. I'd like to know more about Mike and Chris' relationship - I'm a sucker for the romantic stuff. Evans sounds pretty cool too. |
| Joyful 2001-12-26 ch 6, | abuseI'm loving this, keep up the good work! |
| Keiran 2001-12-26 ch 6, | abusegreat. are you perhaps working in some sort of writing buisness, or is it just for fun? cause you're simply great in it. keep going please. |
| Faith K. 2001-12-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love it! Please please please write more!!! |