Nice♥

wow. I thought I would never see the day...well..no.. thats not true. Anyway, I like it. I've never thought of it like that but now that you have planted that seed, I see how the rain is a lot like that. Very insightful for not being religious ^.^ Its beautiful.

Wow...

I loved it! People just don't understand the pain...you did a really great job!

Qutie touching, Kitty. Yep, it's me, Hayai Okami. Read my new fanfic!!!!!
righty. i'll talk to ya later.

er, i dun think you need to add a disclaimer on origanal stuff... in fact, it should be copywrited!! (LoL) I really thought it was nice... not that bad for a religious poem... (im a religious person, i just dont completly agree with the catholic system) pretty. :.:Silver Eagle; the misstress of the skies:.: