"I soar above cloud nine with dewin my hair andstar dust in my eyes "...Simply brilliant. Wish I had thought of that )

Very light hearted...this cheered me up. Nice!

that was really sweet! you must have a really beautiful friend. :)

The first four lines are excellent... As is the rest of the poem. Very good... I'm soo glad that I'm reading all of your older stuff!

Aww...that was so beautiful, Norah. *sniffles* I really wish I could write poetry. Your work just puts me in the most serene state...you're amazing, girlie. Simply amazing.

*Nita

this was great, it shows true emotions. I wish i had a friend i could say the same about! it's a great poem and the poet should be very proud, not just of this but of all of her work!

Very well done! It reminded me of the movie 'Pearl Harbor' when that guy said, "Don't take my wings away"! Very good! p.s.- I'm xxemotionalsilverchairgurlxx's sister.

For a review for this, read my review to "Savior". I'm too lazy to write it again.

Another great peice of work! This was so beautiful. This one is sorta free feeling, I like!

You have an amazing friend, and you care much for them. This is a beautiful dedication.