Dyami: wow. powerful, keep going!Tanaqui: ditto.

wow, really cool! this would make a great song.

wow.. that was really good. im doing a poetry project for my creative writing class and was seeking some inspiration on a ballad.. but i figured id drop in and review it really fast. i like ur style and the moral.

I really like it, except 'like' isn't the right word. It definitely made me feel something.

Oi. What can I say without sounding like an idiot? Awesome!

Oh, I like it very very much

Well written, this is dark, yet it's based on things people go through all the time.