Good poem, but the formatting sucks (in my opinion anyway).

It's an ok poem, a little clich, but everything is a little cliche. You formating sucks, the one and two letter lines jsut gave me a headache and made it hard to read. I would change that. But it was ok.

Chillingly good. I love the way the change throughout this poem flows...

I especially like the lines:

still

you're

laughing

while I'm

weeping-

I will

not

become

the thing I

am. . .

Great stuff, very haunting.

Ahhh... that was good. you know, you should get published! You are really good!

This is old... yet new... still cool... .;;

I love this poem... it sounds like me (stupid nerves)

can i just say this? YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITER! o.o keep writing. i love it.

also a very good poem..keep up the good work